In the late 80’s my life had begun,
And yes it is full of challenges and fun.
Carrying on the innocence that was imbibed in me,
I lived by, as if I was free.
Spending some good years in St. Joseph’s Convent ,School
With badges on my uniform;I did rule
Scoring good,playing good,being good good good,
But alas! That was only in my childhood.
Learning in Don Bosco was really beneficial,
Now I feel, my life got the right facial.
Being a back-bencher; barred me from competitions,
Now I lament the desire for teaspoon determination.
The love for my darling IIT made me insane,
I crossed all barriers;landed on a desert plain.
The fire of being an IITian,was ignited by my mentor,
Yet I feel sorry I couldn’t clear.
Being to KOTA turned my hairs silver,
Now I know,who stands on the other side of river.
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,
But Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.
I love to make friends but fear to be in love
As friendship to me is really all above
I have my principle and here it goes,
I forgive my friends and I forgive my foes.
I am in MCKVIE, pursuing my engineering
Having lots of fun, without much persevering.
This was my poem about my life story
Waiting for the critics or the contrary.
7 comments:
its deep, simple n a deft exercise in the language........the poet has definitely got a way with words!! but this poem leaves an impression of a guy regretting life n longing 4 fame n success...
Great going niru..... Never thought or rather imagined of a poet inside you !
Great thoughts dude !
i bet u wont get ne critics 4dis 1..itz realy gud!kp rocking n kp writing..u'r gud at it!!
i think i agree with oli.... n dude you really had time!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks buddies...
u people r my critics and my source dat inspires me to write.
Thanks for your appreciation.
i hope i keep up to your expectations as always...
now i understand why you are suddenly a poet...my first thought was that anit told you...but it aint so...you have potrayed your lifestory through your poems...and to say the least they are exceptionally well-written....keep the good work up...ROCK ON
wow just love the way you put your entire life story into a poem.. hats off...
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