September 8, 2007

MY LIFE STORY

In the late 80’s my life had begun,
And yes it is full of challenges and fun.
Carrying on the innocence that was imbibed in me,
I lived by, as if I was free.

Spending some good years in St. Joseph’s Convent ,School
With badges on my uniform;I did rule
Scoring good,playing good,being good good good,
But alas! That was only in my childhood.

Learning in Don Bosco was really beneficial,
Now I feel, my life got the right facial.
Being a back-bencher; barred me from competitions,
Now I lament the desire for teaspoon determination.

The love for my darling IIT made me insane,
I crossed all barriers;landed on a desert plain.
The fire of being an IITian,was ignited by my mentor,
Yet I feel sorry I couldn’t clear.

Being to KOTA turned my hairs silver,
Now I know,who stands on the other side of river.
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,
But Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.

I love to make friends but fear to be in love
As friendship to me is really all above
I have my principle and here it goes,
I forgive my friends and I forgive my foes.


I am in MCKVIE, pursuing my engineering
Having lots of fun, without much persevering.

This was my poem about my life story
Waiting for the critics or the contrary.

7 comments:

Broken Chalks said...

its deep, simple n a deft exercise in the language........the poet has definitely got a way with words!! but this poem leaves an impression of a guy regretting life n longing 4 fame n success...

Sidharth said...

Great going niru..... Never thought or rather imagined of a poet inside you !

Great thoughts dude !

Unknown said...

i bet u wont get ne critics 4dis 1..itz realy gud!kp rocking n kp writing..u'r gud at it!!

Swati kaushik said...

i think i agree with oli.... n dude you really had time!!!!!!!!!!!

It's written...No matter how hard you try. said...

thanks buddies...
u people r my critics and my source dat inspires me to write.
Thanks for your appreciation.
i hope i keep up to your expectations as always...

Anonymous said...

now i understand why you are suddenly a poet...my first thought was that anit told you...but it aint so...you have potrayed your lifestory through your poems...and to say the least they are exceptionally well-written....keep the good work up...ROCK ON

Unknown said...

wow just love the way you put your entire life story into a poem.. hats off...