June 28, 2009

R u there?

Prologue (R u There?)


I am not into habit of writing poems, nor am I a good writer.

I just write when I find things going extremely off beat or it is time for me to pen down my thoughts.

Thoughts which the world should know or the thoughts which I find hard to carry any further.

This poem is about the variant characters that I had faced in my life and their peculiar characteristics of treating me unfair.

Well, its all about my experiences.

I hope you would like reading it.
 



R u There?



I am blissful I am a bonhomie
But never,he did the same for me
I realized , but  late that all are meaningful here
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”


He came to me for help, never did I deny
When I was in need of friend he always made me cry
To my surprise he had a reason
‘In love war and friendship’
Everything is fair
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”


She was ditched, betrayed by one and all
Yet I stood by her
No matter what may fall
She used me as a ladder and paved her way through
It was the cheapest deed in friendship that one could bear
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”

Loveth thee more than my own sis
Having her in my life
Was more than just a bliss.
She slapped me hard for my utmost care
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”


I was never gender biased in friendship
Hence people maintained the so called relationship
They linked me up to things undone and words unsaid
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”


I revealed my secrets to him, trusting him mutually
He rusted the trust, and played with it vigorously
Has he humanity to disclose all that I share
And thus I asked the lord
“R u there?”

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey.this is Sudipta...I hope you can recognize.Just went through your blog..the wonderful poems that you have written.It was really quite touching and honestly great.Never could I imagine that you could manage to write so well. :-)
Hey,keep on writing and posting.I'll certainly be waiting to read more from you.
Best of luck,mate.Take care.Byeee

Anonymous said...

people came nd took full advantage of ur innocense nd kicked ur ass as well nd u r still asking "r u dere??"

Kushal Mishra said...

Seriously speaking niraj bhai, you write well although you didnt study what i am studying after having left school.i am sure there's an artist subdued within you...keep on writing such wonderful lyrics,someday the pen shall make you reap some benefits! bye

Ritesh Kedia said...

I can understand the persons u r indicating here. its ur life story till date.
but the pic of urs in ths blogspot is grt!

Unknown said...

hi mishtu,undoubtedly great writing skil.......hidden talent hmmmmm...........but why SAD......there shd be more reasons to make u happy than sad i feel..........keep writing.....jaya.

Unknown said...

hey niraj bhaiya....fantastic poem....i must say...waiting to read the next one........

Niraj said...

hey readers....
thanx for reading my poems and appreciating it...
but please please don't hide ur identity...
do mention it wen ever you comment.
Thanking you.

Unknown said...

hey bro, fantastic. i really appreciate ur efforts for this poem. i never knew my fren has such a wonderful talent . dnt let it down bro, keep writing n u c the girl who ditched u, will regret. i wud lv to know abt "him" n "her" in the poem later whn i m there to share definately. next one shud be a romantic one to impress few gals, wht say.really really grt, m eager for ur nxt one.

Unknown said...

hey nice poem... some times i my self as the lord the same questions!!! wonderfully put... will keep visiting for more.. tanmaya

day said...

hey,when did you start taking interest in writing poems?

Khushi said...

I didnt knew that u r such a good writer......... i really loved ur writings. Now evn i'll wait for ur nxt poem.